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He turned to her
still asleep
her hair
spread out
across the pillow
the rise and fall of her chest
as it takes her breath
the way her mouth is slightly open
comfortable and safe
He wants nothing more
then for her to always be there
when he wakes up
He wants nothing more
to have her always safe and happy
he'd give anything
for her
and he has
When she wakes
he'll smile
and tell her to go back to sleep
this morning can wait

Everynight
She'll wake up
just to know
that he's asleep beside her
still ok
she loves the way he snores
slightly
and the way his face looks
so innocent
When he wakes up
she pretends
to be asleep
so that he can lean in and kiss her lips
and brush his hand
against her cheek
and watch her
go back to sleep
©2006-2009 ~CreatedPoetry
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Author's Comments

A little sappy love thing that I've done way too many times, but I just can't stop doing. Just about as fluffy as Zutara gets, I just watched the Cave of Two Lovers of Youtube again, and it was making me depressed so I sat down and wrote something Zutara. Switching POVs, duh. God, I've uploaded a lot of poetry lately!! Dedicated to DamageCtrl, who supplies me with the best Fanfiction has to offer in her story Rhythm of the Rain on fanfiction.net. Hope yalls don't think its too bad! :peace:

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:iconekormekolindo:
Ah! This is one of your best ones!!! It is so so touching.
:iconcreatedpoetry:
:blush: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing it because its just so darn fluffy!

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:iconekormekolindo:
LOL, fluff all around!
:iconcreatedpoetry:
You can't lose when its so fluffy you get cavaties!

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Something about today
makes me feel a little bit closer
to eternity...
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:icondanithehappy1:
OHHH! OOOHHH ((whimpers)) I LOVED IT I THOUGHT EVERY SINGLE PART WAS SWEET! IT WAS SO AWESOME! I loved that part when she pretends to be asleep so he will kiss her. So great I love it.

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Fear is the key to opening doors, you couldn't open before. Love is the will for walking through them.
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(^.^)o
C('')('')
:iconcreatedpoetry:
:D It just makes me want to jump in and :glomp: them for being so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (whimper) Hehehe

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Something about today
makes me feel a little bit closer
to eternity...
:glomp: Shout out to all the buddies
:iconcreatedpoetry:
:D Thanks!

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Something about today
makes me feel a little bit closer
to eternity...
:glomp: Shout out to all the buddies
:iconzstar:
I love my sap, and your fluffy stories! :D Oh yeah, I get depressed sometimes when I watch The Cave of Two Lovers ¬.¬ Don't worry, there's some hope for Zutara. Nothing's final yet.

This is a very sweet little story and I like how it's kind of set in stanza's. Good job!

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